>I wanna share my terrible dinning exprience in eat eat bistro.
1.wanna是口語用法，就算是單純的抱怨文章也應該避免這種用法。
2.experience拼錯。
3.餐廳名稱是專有名詞應該用引號括起，不然看上去變成了奇怪的文法。
>There are 2 parts in this article.
一般不會這樣講說我文章裡面分兩個部份，這是很奇怪的Chinglish用法，
用比較爛的There are two thing that I have to complain...之類看起來都比較通順。
>First, the worst thing,
這寫法真的很奇怪，the worst thing通常會直接接個is that...然後對到下句的內容，
而且first(第一件事)和the first（第一次）在這裡很容易混淆，其實應該避免這種用法
。
>The airconditioner suddenly stop working and pour a lot of water.
時態...stopped working and poured...
>It makes my waffle and my tablet wet but also my head.
1.時態...It made
2.還有用了but also怎麼會把not only去掉了呢？
原句改：It made not only my waffle and tablet but also my head wet.
不過這樣還不如：It made my waffle, tablet and my head wet.其實也沒比較差啦
3.所以溼的是鬆餅？不然餐點應該用meal
>But the manager didn't do anything immediately, the part-time job guy felt
embarrassed and say sorry.
1.這句前後很不通順呀，這感覺像「但是經理沒做事。工讀生有道歉。」
2.時態時態...有時有有時無
3.part-time job guy太怪了...不過如果不是在單純問對方支薪方式，還不如直接用
clerk就好了
However, the manager didn't do anything immediately. I could only see the
part-time worker felt embarrassed and said sorry.
>The manager only ask the others give us new dishes, he even didn't say sorry
> to us until we left.
1.時態時態......
2.the others??什麼的the others?
3.連接詞消失了
4.give new dishes....Chinglish....
這和上一句不如合併重改
I could only see the part-time worker felt embarrassed and said sorry.
However, the manager didn't do anything immediately. He only asked someone to
serve up again, but he didn't apologized until we left.
>這也是讓我浪費寶貴時間上來希望告訴大家,以防悲劇再度發That's why I spend my
> leisure time on this article.I DON'T WANT ANYONE HAVE THE SAME TERRIBLE
> EXPERIENCE AS MINE.
1.怎麼看這句都應該放在文末。
2.spend my 'leisure' time...好吧，這只能說也是很Chinglish的用法
3.the same as不能這樣用，一定得用be動詞接，不如直接用likes就好了
>Second, we wait for our waffle for at least 40-50 mins
1.waited
2.不想用minutes？錯誤百出的文法搭配縮寫只會讓別人不尊重你的文章
>詢問後店員表示因為只有一台鬆餅機
>The response is there is only one waffle machine.
1.詢問後、店員表示都不見了
After we asked the clerk, he said that they have only one waffle machine.
>There are approximate 40 customer or more, actually it's not a good reason.
> You should tell the customer before they order.
1.approximate通常不用在計算人數這種單純的記數上，表示「以上」就直接用over吧
2.customer可數
BJ4直接改
Nevertheless, there are over 40 customers in the restaurant.
>這並不是一個適當的理由 至少在點菜前應盡告知義務
>actually it's not a good reason.
> You should tell the customer before they order.
BJ4直接改
It was not a good reason. In my opinion, the clerk should tell customers
before they ordered.
個人意見：中文有問題、硬要中翻英，讓英文有更大問題
起碼看看國外英文食記做參考。
我的英文都已經很破啦...隨便看隨便出毛病
不知道為何硬要翻英文？
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